Blog 4

The two statements that were said seem to be true.
Both are neither good or bad.
It is good because he is now king of Cawdour and bad because he is thinking of killing the king.
The prophecy cannot be bad or good, if it is bad, why would it have begun in a truth?
I am the lord of Cowdour, if good why do i think that about the horrible image of the murder that makes my hair on my back stand and my heart drop and knock on my ribs.
My thoughts bother me than the fear.
Thoughts of murder are tormenting me so that any future action is covered by the thoughts of whats to come and nothing is what it seems.

Blog 3

I had the pleasure of reading Dimitra Vasiliou’s paper that spoke about the strength of womanhood throughout the plays of Antigone and Medea. I like the fact that you used quotes throughout your paper. I also liked how you explained each quote and how it connected with your thesis. I had a good time reading your paper, you made to writing easy to read. I like how you spoke about the book and have detail about the story because if I was a person that did not know the plays I would appreciate the fact that you gave background knowledge about the story. It helps the reader to know what is going on and it gives them knowledge and interested to go out and actually read the actual plays. I also like that  your writing had a flow to it. I like that you managed to writing and use quotes in a way that made senses and was not awkward.

 And it was great to see how similar both our paper related with the topic. I felt that for my paper , my greatest strength was the quotes I used. I feel that I did a good job in trying to make the quotes flow with my writing. I tried my best to make the text flow and not just throw random quotes around. I feel that it’s important to make sure the quotes you put are helping you prove your point rather than making the reader feel lost. I felt that my greatest challenge when writing this paper, was trying to not summarize the books to much. I had difficulties trying to make my point without going into major detail about the book. If I had the chance to change anything about this assignment I would say I would have wanted to add more quotes to my paper and also not have made my paper so much of a summary but rather a analyses instead. In the future after writing this paper and reading someone else’s. I would try my best to improve on my mistakes and try my best to not make im paper into a summary form and try to make my papers into a analyzes instead. I enjoy taking the time to write this paper and also I enjoyed taking the time in reading someone  else’s paper and taking their ideas and applying them into my own analysis.